THE SUN had closd the winter day,
The curless quat their roarin play,
And hungerd maukin taen her way,
To kail-yards green,
While faithless snaws ilk step betray
Whare she has been.
The threshers weary flingin-tree,
The lee-lang day had tired me;
And when the day had closd his ee,
Far i the west,
Ben i the spence, right pensivelie,
I gaed to rest.
There, lanely by the ingle-cheek,
I sat and eyd the spewing reek,
That filld, wi hoast-provoking smeek,
The auld clay biggin;
An heard the restless rattons squeak
About the riggin.
All in this mottie, misty clime,
I backward musd on wasted time,
How I had spent my youthfu prime,
An done nae thing,
But stringing blethers up in rhyme,
For fools to sing.
Had I to guid advice but harkit,
I might, by this, hae led a market,
Or strutted in a bank and clarkit
My cash-account;
While here, half-mad, half-fed, half-sarkit.
Is a th amount.
I started, muttring, blockhead! coof!
And heavd on high my waukit loof,
To swear by a yon starry roof,
Or some rash aith,
That I henceforth wad be rhyme-proof
Till my last breath
When click! the string the snick did draw;
An jee! the door gaed to the wa;
An by my ingle-lowe I saw,
Now bleezin bright,
A tight, outlandish hizzie, braw,
Come full in sight.
Ye need na doubt, I held my whisht;
The infant aith, half-formd, was crusht
I glowrd as eeries Id been dusht
In some wild glen;
When sweet, like honest Worth, she blusht,
An steppèd ben.
Green, slender, leaf-clad holly-boughs
Were twisted, gracefu, round her brows;
I took her for some Scottish Muse,
By that same token;
And come to stop those reckless vows,
Would soon been broken.
A hair-braind, sentimental trace
Was strongly markèd in her face;
A wildly-witty, rustic grace
Shone full upon her;
Her eye, evn turnd on empty space,
Beamd keen with honour.
Down flowd her robe, a tartan sheen,
Till half a leg was scrimply seen;
An such a leg! my bonie Jean
Could only peer it;
Sae straught, sae taper, tight an clean
Nane else came near it.
Her mantle large, of greenish hue,
My gazing wonder chiefly drew:
Deep lights and shades, bold-mingling, threw
A lustre grand;
And seemd, to my astonishd view,
A well-known land.
Here, rivers in the sea were lost;
There, mountains to the skies were tosst:
Here, tumbling billows markd the coast,
With surging foam;
There, distant shone Arts lofty boast,
The lordly dome.
Here, Doon pourd down his far-fetchd floods;
There, well-fed Irwine stately thuds:
Auld hermit Ayr staw thro his woods,
On to the shore;
And many a lesser torrent scuds,
With seeming roar.
Low, in a sandy valley spread,
An ancient borough reard her head;
Still, as in Scottish story read,
She boasts a race
To evry nobler virtue bred,
And polishd grace. 2
By stately towr, or palace fair,
Or ruins pendent in the air,
Bold stems of heroes, here and there,
I could discern;
Some seemd to muse, some seemd to dare,
With feature stern.
My heart did glowing transport feel,
To see a race heroic 3 wheel,
And brandish round the deep-dyed steel,
In sturdy blows;
While, back-recoiling, seemd to reel
Their Suthron foes.
His Countrys Saviour, 4 mark him well!
Bold Richardtons heroic swell,; 5
The chief, on Sark who glorious fell, 6
In high command;
And he whom ruthless fates expel
His native land.
There, where a sceptrd Pictish shade
Stalkd round his ashes lowly laid, 7
I markd a martial race, pourtrayd
In colours strong:
Bold, soldier-featurd, undismayd,
They strode along.
Thro many a wild, romantic grove, 8
Near many a hermit-fancied cove
(Fit haunts for friendship or for love,
In musing mood),
An aged Judge, I saw him rove,
Dispensing good.
With deep-struck, reverential awe,
The learned Sire and Son I saw: 9
To Natures God, and Natures law,
They gave their lore;
This, all its source and end to draw,
That, to adore.
Brydons brave ward 10 I well could spy,
Beneath old Scotias smiling eye:
Who calld on Fame, low standing by,
To hand him on,
Where many a patriot-name on high,
And hero shone.
DUAN SECONDWith musing-deep, astonishd stare,
I viewd the heavenly-seeming Fair;
A whispering throb did witness bear
Of kindred sweet,
When with an elder sisters air
She did me greet.
All hail! my own inspired bard!
In me thy native Muse regard;
Nor longer mourn thy fate is hard,
Thus poorly low;
I come to give thee such reward,
As we bestow!
Know, the great genius of this land
Has many a light aerial band,
Who, all beneath his high command,
Harmoniously,
As arts or arms they understand,
Their labours ply.
They Scotias race among them share:
Some fire the soldier on to dare;
Some rouse the patriot up to bare
Corruptions heart:
Some teach the barda darling care
The tuneful art.
Mong swelling floods of reeking gore,
They, ardent, kindling spirits pour;
Or, mid the venal senates roar,
They, sightless, stand,
To mend the honest patriot-lore,
And grace the hand.
And when the bard, or hoary sage,
Charm or instruct the future age,
They bind the wild poetric rage
In energy,
Or point the inconclusive page
Full on the eye.
Hence, Fullarton, the brave and young;
Hence, Dempsters zeal-inspired tongue;
Hence, sweet, harmonious Beattie sung
His Minstrel lays;
Or tore, with noble ardour stung,
The sceptics bays.
To lower orders are assignd
The humbler ranks of human-kind,
The rustic bard, the labring hind,
The artisan;
All choose, as various theyre inclind,
The various man.
When yellow waves the heavy grain,
The threatning storm some strongly rein;
Some teach to meliorate the plain
With tillage-skill;
And some instruct the shepherd-train,
Blythe oer the hill.
Some hint the lovers harmless wile;
Some grace the maidens artless smile;
Some soothe the labrers weary toil
For humble gains,
And make his cottage-scenes beguile
His cares and pains.
Some, bounded to a district-space
Explore at large mans infant race,
To mark the embryotic trace
Of rustic bard;
And careful note each opening grace,
A guide and guard.
Of these am ICoila my name:
And this district as mine I claim,
Where once the Campbells, chiefs of fame,
Held ruling power:
I markd thy embryo-tuneful flame,
Thy natal hour.
With future hope I oft would gaze
Fond, on thy little early ways,
Thy rudely, carolld, chiming phrase,
In uncouth rhymes;
Fird at the simple, artless lays
Of other times.
I saw thee seek the sounding shore,
Delighted with the dashing roar;
Or when the North his fleecy store
Drove thro the sky,
I saw grim Natures visage hoar
Struck thy young eye.
Or when the deep green-mantled earth
Warm cherishd evry flowerets birth,
And joy and music pouring forth
In evry grove;
I saw thee eye the general mirth
With boundless love.
When ripend fields and azure skies
Calld forth the reapers rustling noise,
I saw thee leave their evning joys,
And lonely stalk,
To vent thy bosoms swelling rise,
In pensive walk.
When youthful love, warm-blushing, strong,
Keen-shivering, shot thy nerves along,
Those accents grateful to thy tongue,
Th adorèd Name,
I taught thee how to pour in song,
To soothe thy flame.
I saw thy pulses maddening play,
Wild send thee Pleasures devious way,
Misled by Fancys meteor-ray,
By passion driven;
But yet the light that led astray
Was light from Heaven.
I taught thy manners-painting strains,
The loves, the ways of simple swains,
Till now, oer all my wide domains
Thy fame extends;
And some, the pride of Coilas plains,
Become thy friends.
Thou canst not learn, nor I can show,
To paint with Thomsons landscape glow;
Or wake the bosom-melting throe,
With Shenstones art;
Or pour, with Gray, the moving flow
Warm on the heart.
Yet, all beneath th unrivalld rose,
T e lowly daisy sweetly blows;
Tho large the forests monarch throws
His army shade,
Yet green the juicy hawthorn grows,
Adown the glade.
Then never murmur nor repine;
Strive in thy humble sphere to shine;
And trust me, not Potosis mine,
Nor kings regard,
Can give a bliss oermatching thine,
A rustic bard.
To give my counsels all in one,
Thy tuneful flame still careful fan:
Preserve the dignity of Man,
With soul erect;
And trust the Universal Plan
Will all protect.
And wear thou thisshe solemn said,
And bound the holly round my head:
The polishd leaves and berries red
Did rustling play;
And, like a passing thought, she fled
In light away. [To Mrs. Stewart of Stair Burns presented a manuscript copy of the Vision. That copy embraces about twenty stanzas at the end of Duan First, which he cancelled when he came to print the price in his Kilmarnock volume. Seven of these he restored in printing his second edition, as noted on p. 174. The following are the verses which he left unpublished.]
Note 1. Duan, a term of Ossians for the different divisions of a digressive poem. See his Cath-Loda, vol. 2 of MPhersons translation.R. B. [back]
Note 2. The seven stanzas following this were first printed in the Edinburgh edition, 1787. Other stanzas, never published by Burns himself, are given on p. 180. [back]
Note 3. The Wallaces.R. B. [back]
Note 4. William Wallace.R. B. [back]
Note 5. Adam Wallace of Richardton, cousin to the immortal preserver of Scottish independence.R. B. [back]
Note 6. Wallace, laird of Craigie, who was second in command under Douglas, Earl of Ormond, at the famous battle on the banks of Sark, fought anno 1448. That glorious victory was principally owing to the judicious conduct and intrepid valour of the gallant laird of Craigie, who died of his wounds after the action.R. B. [back]
Note 7. Coilus, King of the Picts, from whom the district of Kyle is said to take its name, lies buried, as tradition says, near the family seat of the Montgomeries of Coilsfield, where his burial-place is still shown.R. B. [back]
Note 8. Barskimming, the seat of the Lord Justice-Clerk.R. B. [back]
Note 9. Catrine, the seat of the late Doctor and present Professor Stewart.R. B. [back]